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The last paragraph of the "Activation" section gets a little confusing to me. The paragraph starts off by talking about what is going to happen with the brigade in the future, but then switches to discussing past operations. Could this be moved around so it is a bit more chronological, like the
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I removed the links to the battalion sized units since articles about them are unlikely to be made; however I left the Command sized unit redlinks because those formations are much larger and it is very likely that articles about them will be made.
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Another nice article! There are just a couple of prose/MOS issues that I would like to see fixed before I pass the article, so I am going to place it on hold. Please let me know if you have any questions.
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There are quite a few red links sprinkled throughout the article. Like with the 166th - if they're going to become articles, leave them; if they're not, please remove them.
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Everything looks good, so I'm going to pass the article to GA status. Nice work, and thanks again for the prompt response.
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I have responded to your comments. Please let me know if there is anything else that needs doing.
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And I'll take this one too! Should have the review up in a bit...
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