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There are many problems. This article states the notability is by being the wife. Notability is not inherited. You may argue that notability is being First Lady but the first sentence of the article does not state this. It is only until later. This is a glaring example of the editors trying to
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The prose is needs improvement. Some people use the educational background as a framework to start. This could be done by mentioning the schools attended and degrees. Having dating information leads one to believe that her notability is just from being the wife. This doesn't mean that dating
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Images are very, very difficult to get. However, having two with her standing by her husband is duplication. Are there other images of her? How about the gubernatorial portrait that is mentioned?
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The First Lady section is the key to her notability. If this section is written like a good article, then half the battle is won. So focus on major revamping of this section.
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write this good article in good faith but falling short. With hard work, this can be fixed. Good luck.
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