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789:"Korber explains, “Nobody had really tried this kind of thing before, where you assemble a whole protein to solve that immunological problem on the computer. Even after it worked, it was hard to convince people that this novel thing could be a vaccine because it hadn’t been done before.” " - for the most part, the quotes in this article are appropriately used, but I think the first half of this quote might be better conveyed through text, followed by the last bit of the quote ("Even after it worked, it was hard... before").
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I can go through and standardize the references and names today. Thanks for your work thus far, and I will let you know if I have additional suggestions! For future reference, if you want to give me a message notification, you can use {{ping|Ceranthor}}. Cheers,
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