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says: "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article in such a way that it can stand on its own as a concise version of the article." There is also a stray sentence at the end of the lead. Please reorganise to consolidate this into a paragraph, two
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An excellent article, reminded me of my secondary school chemistry. Just the lead section to be fixed. On hold for seven days. ––
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