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Whoops, I guess I should have actually followed some of those references. I feel like my misinterpretation is an easy one to make though. I'm not sure if there's any clearer way to present the information though. Maybe could have asterisks next to the "N/A" entries with a note in small font under the
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What do you mean? The EP is on every single list. Some of them don't have a position but it is a preference of editor, they didn't choose "This was my second favorite", they just said, "this one is among my favorites of the year". I don't know, Emotion: Side B made The A.V. Club's albums of the year
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Apologies for the delay; I ended up having a busier weekend than I anticipated and reviewing this article dropped off my to-do list. I think all the changes recommended in the review were solid. I've made some additional copyedits of my own. Other than the "megahit" line, I don't think any of my
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is "most instructive in the ways it illuminates her process. It lets us peek in on the misfits and hints at the unsexy labor of music-making." Nelson echoes this sentiment, and both reviewers found the track "Body
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Hello! I just did a first read through the article and my overall impression is that it's in a very healthy state. I saw a few little instances of awkward or unclear wording, but I think in most cases I can fix those in less time than it would take me to complain about them here.
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seemed like an effort at a song that could have fulfilled a role as a central mega-single (the role the reviewer believes was played by "Run Away With Me"), and that these songs were not necessarily destined or intended to have been mere "filler" if they had appeared on
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we don't have rows for any of the charts the album didn't appear on. (Also, are we sure the EP was eligible for all those lists on which it didn't appear? i.e. were there any EPs or mixtapes on The A.V. Club's albums of the year list, or was it all LPs?)
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Chiming in after the fact to agree with the removal. I think I can kinda see what the original writer was getting at, with the hiatus spurring Jepsen's change in sound and choice of collaborators, which would have impacted the
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finds Jepsen coming to a sweet realization: Don't think it over." She praised the EP for its high "single potential" and ponders if the songs were blueprints to "Run Away with Me",
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