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Thanks! It was a bit weird, really - a paper wanted to use a photograph of mine to illustrate a news story about the most recent death (which never went to print, in the end), which is how I learned of it. I was curious about the whole thing, read up on the disease, found that the sources were all a
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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. I am very impressed that you decided to write on this topic, researched it, and put together this article with accurate pics. I confess I know nothing about the topic, but your references accurately support your statement.
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The only other suggestion I have is that you might change the section heading "Discovery and spread" to "History" as that is the common format for articles on similar topics.
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I've made the changes you suggest - I've played with a dozen different headings here before, so a new permutation seems fair enough. Lede is now expanded. Thoughts?
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