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good start (organization, secondary sources, notability) but would benefit from a thoughtful copy edit to become more encyclopedic. Sometimes issues in style and tone can occur due to variations in language usage between countries. I do not think the promotional tag exactly fits this situation. Rather, I believe this article should be flagged with the "Like resume" tag (surrounded by {{ }} instead of quotations) which generates the following "This biographical article is written like a résumé. Please help improve it by revising it to be neutral and encyclopedic". Without going into specific examples, I reached the conclusion because the text overly focuses on achievements and outcomes and also uses a lot of adjectives and adverbs. Fortunately, the
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Hi everyone. I haven't looked at the sources in depth, just working on the tone for now. I've started on the lead and career section. Haven't finished. Please take a look and make any necessary changes and/or discuss here. It is too promotional but nothing major that can't be fixed with good old
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GOCE will copy edit the article for you and address the concerns I have indicated. It may take months before someone from GOCE gets to this article, but the editor will be neutral to this situation and skilled in encyclopedic style.
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His efforts led to significant cost reductions in procurement processes, ensuring efficient project delivery and achieving over 5% reduction in the budgets of major projects.
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This section is promotional, so I'm copying and pasting it here but removing it from the article. I've already summarised in the article's career section.
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His past roles have honed his capabilities and amassed valuable experiences that have thoroughly equipped him for his present position.
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Could you please indicate the areas where this wikipedia page still reads like an advert even after making the necessary edits?
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