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I am going to ask for a second oponion on this as I am not an experienced reviewer and do think that this article does not deserve to be failed without someone elses view because it is certaintly good in alot of aspects.
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In 'Rivera, Republic and Civil War (1923–1957)', why is "CF Barcelona" used and then in the next paragraph, "FC Barcelona" is used. Is this correct? If so, you should explain what happened to the name.
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Champions League line-up pictures? You can click on the link for the line-ups. Different images would improve the article more than these line-ups would.
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Also in 'Rivera, Republic and Civil War (1923–1957)', "Real Madrid dominated the match, thrashing Barça 11–1.". "Dominated" and "thrashing" is
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Sorry for the late reply, and thanks to Brad78 for the comments. I have a few more before I pass this though:
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Try looking it over now. I have addressed all of the concerns apart from the last point.
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Three references added. Thank you for taking the time for doing this review.
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OK, i'm going to pass this; I have changed the criteria above. Well Done!
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