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I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise
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mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.
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Explain in the body as well as the lead what a wire brokerage is. The lead just sumarizes the article, it shouldn't introduce information not in the body of the article.
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Some information on how the partners protected themselves as well as what hte bank did between Civil War and Panic
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lead has info not in the body and needs to mention the bankruptcy
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Which Geisst work is referred to in footnote 5? (Geisst p. 54)?
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What did the bank do after the Civil War and before the Panic?
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