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Big improvements, I have no problem passing this article for GA immediately. Very nice work. (As a minor note, try not to address the subject as "Lewis" in the article: its usual in bibliographies to use the surname rather than the first name when referring to someone unless there is a particular
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again. Feel free to drop a message on my talk page if you have any questions, and many thanks for all the hard work that has gone into this article thus far. (If you are really busy, let me know and I'll give more time. I need to know however so I can see that someone is interested in addressing
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The prose is poor, perhaps 4/10. Many sections are messy, particularly the personal life and 2008 seasons. Many stubby sentences shoved in whithout care or attention, and some sections written in atrocious prose. Major copyedit urgently
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Some of the online references are inproperly formatted, and there seems to be a paucity of references in some of the newer information.
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Seem to be stretching NPOV in his favour, although this is probably a result of the prose problems outlined above.
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Reworked sections for 2008 season and personal life, moving on to rechecking 2007 season and checking for PoV-
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I will check back in no less than seven days. If progress is being made, the article will remain listed as a
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need to disambiguate in a sentence (i.e. between Lewis and his father).--
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Reworked all apart from the "Records" section and after --
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