430:. The sub-chapter dealing with the Lithuanian Civil War in Sliesoriūnas' book of 2015, which is the sub-chapter "4.3 Lithuanian Civil War (1697–1702)", continues onto sub-chapter " 4.4 Great Northern War in Lithuania (1700–1709)". I can only assume that the reason for the cut-off year of 1702 is because, as Sliesoriūnas writes in p550-551, "The Grand Duchy of Lithuania was almost free from the units of the Swedes and their allies Sapieha from the latter half of 1702 until 1704." As for Budreckis, he does not give any ending year for the civil war, instead continuing on about the events in Lithuania during the Great Northern War, as well as touching upon the remaining 18th century - the article's main focus is the Lithuanian Grand Hetmans and so it concerns them mainly.
361:"On 6 October 1696 in Warsaw, an agreement was signed between the Bishop of Vilnius and the representative of the Lithuanian Grand Hetman. It was agreed upon that there would be some benefits for the Bishop of Vilnius' ecclesiastical land holdings, but the hetman's right to decide whether to quarter the army for winter in the bishop's and church's holdings was, practically speaking, recognized. The nuncio committed himself to declaring the hetman innocent. It was forbidden in the future to excommunicate Lithuania's ministers without the Pope's approval in advance. The bishop refused to call the hetman to the sejm's court. ".
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705:, at this point the review has been open for well over 6 months. The last edits the nom made were at ANI on January 25, during a discussion about the two of you having a content dispute elsewhere in the Lithuania topic area. During that ANI he went so far as to suggest you be TBANned from the area. There's also an
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background of the events should be expanded, it is not mentioned that originally
Sapieha was in conflict primarily with King Sobieski, while the Bishop of Vilnius was more a royal tool. It should be mentioned that Sapieha's power was built up by the king as a counterbalance to the Pacs. And it was
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for ease, because my responses will be intermingling with your text, so I'm doing it for clarity's sake. I'm dividing up my responses like that because I can't immediately address all the different things you've noticed, so I will address some of them faster, and others a bit slower, due to the
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try to double check dates and names, we need more dates of easily datable events like battles. Check if nothing is omitted. For example there is no mention of the agreement of 28 January 1698. Also I'm pretty sure that
Sapieha's army in Jurbarkas battle was led by Jerzy not Kazimierz Jan.
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still valid: the article still lacks neccessary context, it omits important events, the narrative is also incomprehensible, it is not clear why some things follow each other. It is still unclear why the article ends with 1702 saying that "the civil war was still going
572:, it's been over three weeks since you last posted, and you've made over a hundred edits elsewhere on Knowledge while not posting to this review. If you can't prioritize this review, then you should strongly consider calling for a new reviewer. It isn't fair to
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Neuburg affair is mentioned but still lacks detail; there is not mention of "Berlin scandal" and involvement of king's son Jakub, who was berthorted to
Karolina Radziwiłł. Also there is no mention of a short "war" between Radziwiłłs and Sapiehas in after her
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the aims and causes of the war, as well as its ultimate conclusion, are not clear. The leaders of the republican camp (Ludwik Pociej, Grzegorz
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You may have to judge the article on its current state then. It doesn't make sense to keep it open for 6 months waiting for the nom to engage. ♠
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for discussion. No prejudice against a renomination should the nominator return at a later date and wish to undertake GAN again. ♠
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