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Training for Running and Hurdling. Vol 1.
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University head strength and conditioning coach Jay DeMayo is currently using Yessisâ system.', Is this really necessary? I'm sure a very large amount of universities are using similar plyometric systems. Why is it worth mentioning that Richmond does?
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Bondarchukâs signature work Transfer of Training and the signature work of Vladimir Issurin, Block Periodization Training', Extremely long sentence... revise and simplify?
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