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The first sentence of the lead needs to be rewritten; it is too complex and should probably be rewritten into two sentences. The problem lays in that the listing of alternative names breaks up the sentence so the flow is lost. Also, in the main text the sentence "However, The Manu Smriti calls the
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earth (Prithvi) as Prithu's wife, instead of his daughter, thus was the name Prithvi from her husband's name." doesn't make sense to me. Could you please rewrite it. Otherwise I have done some minor copyediting.
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Two sentences to fix up and the article will pass. If you have any questions or comments, do not hesitate to state them here.
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whenever citing a book. There were three instances that didn't comply, but I have fixed them up.
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Since the concerns have been addressed, I hereby declare this article Good. Congratulations!
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