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Hey Coco! I'm glad you chose to write about this topic; there are many stories of the
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History of the Holocaust in which you quote the population of European Jews after World War II. Other than that the other sources looked strong! Good job :)
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Tenenbaum, who was the daughter of Hershel Tenenbaum and raised Kozlowska Tenenbaum." I am not sure who Kozlowska is in this context.
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Overall, I think this is a great article about a really interesting woman! I made some grammatical edits in a few places so that the piece reads a little more smoothly.
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