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Looks better but I'm having some second thoughts on the prose now. I went in and did some copy editing myself but the article needs an experienced editor to go over it. If you have someone in mind please ask them to look at it. Alternatively I can try again myself.
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The lead section should summarize the entire article content. Additionally there is information in the lead that is not in the body of the article. The use of citations in the lead section is optional however, there is currently overkill
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There is a large gap in the history of the ship between its launching and the sinking incident; 1912–1926. What happened during those years?
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