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If I were you, I would likely combine this section and "In popular culture" into one larger section titled "Promotion and use in media" or something along those lines, since one to two sentences/statements per section is quite
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Absolutely great article–short and sweet. However, some changes need to be made before passing so I'll place it on hold for seven days for these changes to occur. Good luck! Cheers,
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That's cool! A movie is named after this song! Do you think more could be said in this section, since, like I said, there is an entire movie named due to this song?
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Remember, you only need one link per article to a reference's website, publication, or work, so secondary and so on links are unnecessary and not needed:
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Thanks for the great review. I implemented all your changes except for the one on Ref #13 -- that's part of the formatting inside the chart box.
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This is barely literate English. Is this someone's idea of encyclopaedese? What is wrong with a natural turn of phrase such as
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My bad! I'll review your changes now. Thanks for the quick response, it is very welcomed in my current schedule! Cheers,
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The "US Album Rock Tracks" chart should be placed above "US Modern Rock Tracks" for alphabetization purposes
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Remove the flatlist from the "Label" parameter as there is one label, so it is unnecessary and not needed
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Link "Warner Bros." since it's the first mention of the company in the article, minus the lead of course
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Ref #11 – Remove the link to "RPM (Ottawa: Library and Archives Canada" please
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Ref #10 – Remove the link to "RPM (Ottawa: Library and Archives Canada" please
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Please add an alt in the parameter of the same name for the single image cover
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Any other things you can add here? Any reviews regarding his
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Add "well" after "performed" in the lead-in sentence please
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Instead of linking "single", you should link "lead single"
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Ref #13 – Remove the link to "UK Singles Chart" please
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