349:. The reason cited is "Remove original research not mentioned in citation. Remove trivia section not covered or referenced in any third party reliable sources." I suppose looking at an amazon page and the user comments on it would be considered original research, and, thus, we must find a third party to look at an amazon page and comments and make a superior, third-party analysis that states: "Users made comments." Otherwise the section is well cited and relevant to the book's history, and if there are no objections by the end of the month I will restore it.
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I wrote a fairly lengthy section on the styles of combat we see in this book. I invite others to add to this section as they see fit, but please only correct any minor mistakes I made in the original posting (I listened to Way of Kings in audio book format so I might have spelled something wrong).
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I limited this section to types of combat we see that are fairly unique to WoK. For that matter "Styles of Combat" might not even be the best title for this section, but it will do until a better one comes along.–
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