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The word "The" is used at the beginning of a lot of sentences. Can this sentence "The trustees wanted to see the cost estimates for moving the Tin Can before deciding" be flipped to "Prior to deciding on the future of the venue, the trustees wanted to see the cost estimates for moving the Tin
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600:"Those that stayed in the structure were known as "tin canners." Those staying in the Tin Can would bathe and use the restrooms in Woollen Gymnasium." merge into one sentence.
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Thanks for the review! I've made the changes outlined above. Let me know if you think of anything else!
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