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Hi, I'm reading the Lord of the Rings, and I just noticed he describes Frodo as a "tween" when he moves in with Bilbo ("At that time Frodo was still in his tweens, as the hobbits called the irresponsible twenties between childhood and coming of age at thirty-three."). I thought "wow, maybe he
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