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This is a solid article overall, evidenced through the few points mentioned above. The references also look fine - I've converted all the dates to mdy format so they're consistent. As always, I enjoy reading these. Once the minor points are out of the way this will be good to go.
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and Lee Lamothe stated of the sentence respectively, "It's a great deal. He couldn't expect anything better", and, "I think the system has been beaten again"."
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in the United States" - this reads a bit choppy, needs rephrasing Massino, who received a life sentence for murder after he
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Thank you both, I missed that part in the aftermath section. With those out of the way, I'll be happy to promote this.
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The quote in the "Aftermath" subsection doesn't match the source, but
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to Mr. Rizzuto, Rizzuto got off easy with just a five-year prison term
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Let me know if needs further refinement. "Organized crime authors
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etc? If he is still serving his life sentence of course
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I'll get to this soon, within a couple of days... ♦
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