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I've made some minor copyedits and the article is improved, but it still suffers from unqualified peacock terms and there isn't a single inbound link. Also, I would consider revising the "featured in (list of publications)". It's not that helpful to say someone has been in a lot of magazines and
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This now has been cleaned up entirerly per your comments and should be ok. Should you insist on making more edits rather than placing claims to dispute the page, please comment here first and allow me a chance to clean it up.
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Believe all the edits have been made. Should you have any further comments would be great if you make them here before changing article. All edits have been made.
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newspapers, but it is helpful to talk about what those articles say about him. As a rule of thumb, it helps to replace adjective with concrete facts and numbers. --
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