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sure there's a particular page for Watson. I can try and check that tonight. Ref 13 is a different issue: it is the book for which the art work forms the cover - the fact that it is Josie
Petrick's painting is stated on an unnumbered inside front page, so i couldn't really think how to reference that. Thoughts?
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Thank you for that. I've made the two changes suggested. Regarding images: I am trying to prepare one for this article: because there is a sentence in the article that talks specificially about the colours and iconography, I think a fair-use image can be sustained. But I am having technical problems
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I'm happy with your explanations and happy that the information is verifiable (although would be grateful if you could check that ref no. 5). I'm not sure how this would go at FAC, not sure of the best way to convey what you're saying in the references, but as I say, I'm happy that as far as this
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There are no page numbers for references 5 and 11, because in each case the book in general is the source - the whole book at ref 5 is about the commencement of that movement in 1971, and Bardon's role; ref 11 is about the
Indigenous designs for the Musee du quai branly, but (from memory) i'm not
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PS - I have added a background section - I don't know why I forgot to this for this article. This is generic text, in that I wrote a para and have inserted it (with minor variations) into most of the articles I have created about female artists of the central and western deserts.
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In the "Life" section, it says "By 2008, Robin had died; her son Damien
Petrick went on to marry..." Presumably, from what has gone before, this was Robin's son also? If so, it would perhaps sound better as
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Presumably no free images available. An image of her work would be advantageous, although I appreciate there may not be the levels of analysis of her work available that would be appropriate for fair use
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