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I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise
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This sentence just struck me as very clunky... perhaps reword? "In caves, individuals either group in large groups of more than 50 bats that are not reproductively active or in smaller groups of at most five bats which do show signs of breeding activity."
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