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radiographs performed on Mrs. Schiavo on the day of, in the days after, or in the months after her initial collapse. Indeed, within an hour of her initial hospital admission, radiographic examination of her cervical spine was negative. Specifically, external signs of strangulation including cutaneous or deep neck injury, facial/conjunctival petechiae, and other blunt trauma were not observed or recorded during her initial hospital admission. Autopsy examination of her neck structures 15 years after her initial collapse did not detect any signs of remote trauma, but, with such a delay, the exam was unlikely to show any residual neck findings."
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From 1998 to the end of 2002, the Schindlers were locked in a struggle in the courts, first to decide if Schiavo should be removed from life support and then the appeals by her parents to block this determination. This legal struggle received no significant publicity. This phase started with her
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Thogmartin found that "there was no proof that Terri Schiavo ever had an eating disorder such as bulimia." Regarding the possibility of strangulation or domestic violence as a cause of Schiavo's initial collapse, the report states: "No trauma was noted on any of the numerous physical exams or
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The issue of conflict of interest raised by guardian ad litem Pearse attached to the Schindlers as well, he reported, since, had they prevailed in the various litigation over guardianship, they as the presumed heirs-at-law would have inherited the remainder of Mrs. Schiavo's estate upon her
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The article Lead should summarise the artcile, it is not desirable to have mini-summaries throughout. Also note that in respect to this phrase, it would be better to spell out
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On the morning of February 25, 1990, at approximately 4:30 a.m. EST, Terri collapsed in a hallway of her St. Petersburg apartment.
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Make the difference between Jeb and George W Bush absolutely clear by always using their title, e.g. Governor or President.
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Terri Schiavo collapsed in her home and experienced respiratory and cardiac arrest on February 25, 1990, ...
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On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed, major contributors and projects will be informed.
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The Terri Schiavo case drew much public attention as the case rose to State and then Federal legislation.
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husband's initial petition to have the feeding tube removed and involved four legal decisions of note.
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The Terri Schiavo case drew much public attention as the case rose to State and then Federal courts.
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Coincidentally, the Pope himself died two days after Schiavo, replacing her story as front-page news.
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Single sentences need consolidate into preceding or succeeding paragraph.
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this is completely ungrammatical, rewrite for clarity.
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