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2005
June 13 promoted 10 failed
July 20 promoted 8 failed
August 14 promoted 9 failed
September 3 promoted 8 failed
October 7 promoted 2 failed
November 7 promoted 6 failed 1 removed
December 6 promoted 4 failed
2006
January 11 promoted 11 failed 1 removed
February 3 promoted 8 failed 1 kept
March 13 promoted 11 failed 2 kept
April 10 promoted 5 failed 1 removed
May 10 promoted 7 failed 1 kept
June 9 promoted 10 failed
July 10 promoted 9 failed 1 kept
August 10 promoted 7 failed 1 kept
September 5 promoted 7 failed
October 8 promoted 10 failed 1 removed
November 11 promoted 8 failed 2 kept
December 20 promoted 11 failed
2007
January 18 promoted 11 failed
February 11 promoted 11 failed
March 12 promoted 10 failed 1 kept
April 20 promoted 17 failed 1 kept
May 23 promoted 14 failed
June 22 promoted 9 failed 1 kept
July 29 promoted 20 failed 2 kept/1 removed
August 41 promoted 15 failed 3 removed
September 42 promoted 11 failed 1 kept/1 removed
October 43 promoted 17 failed 2 kept
November 40 promoted 18 failed
December 38 promoted 15 failed 2 removed
2008
January 46 promoted 18 failed 6 removed
February 34 promoted 16 failed 10 removed/3 kept
March 65 promoted 9 failed 4 removed/2 kept
April 48 promoted 25 failed 2 removed/2 kept
May 50 promoted 39 failed 1 removed
June 46 promoted 23 failed/2 quick-failed 4 removed/1 kept
July 85 promoted 27 failed/10 quick-failed 3 removed/2 kept
August 58 promoted 52 failed/7 quick-failed 4 removed/1 kept
September 59 promoted 33 failed/5 quick-failed 3 removed/1 kept
October 75 promoted 30 failed/2 quick-failed 5 removed
November 86 promoted 13 failed 8 removed/5 kept
December 70 promoted 11 failed 3 removed/2 kept
2009
January 63 promoted 16 failed 3 removed/1 kept
February 62 promoted 24 failed/1 quick-failed 4 removed/1 kept
March 47 promoted 14 failed 4 removed/1 kept
April 47 promoted 15 failed 13 removed/2 kept
May 28 promoted 19 failed 15 removed/2 kept
June 56 promoted 14 failed 16 removed/4 kept
July 45 promoted 21 failed 9 removed/5 kept
August 37 promoted 15 failed 8 removed/6 kept
September 25 promoted 11 failed 3 removed/4 kept
October 40 promoted 13 failed 2 removed/4 kept
November 26 promoted 9 failed 2 removed/1 kept
December 24 promoted 14 failed 4 removed/0 kept
2010
January 30 promoted 13 failed 2 removed/2 kept
February 39 promoted 23 failed 0 removed/8 kept
March 38 promoted 20 failed 2 removed/1 kept
April 35 promoted 10 failed 3 removed/1 kept
May 30 promoted 7 failed 2 removed/2 kept
June 33 promoted 6 failed 0 removed/2 kept
July 36 promoted 15 failed 1 removed/5 kept
August 31 promoted 10 failed 3 removed/0 kept
September 36 promoted 13 failed 1 removed/3 kept
October 23 promoted 13 failed 3 removed/0 kept
November 22 promoted 10 failed 2 removed/2 kept
December 26 promoted 7 failed 3 removed/2 kept
2011
January 16 promoted 13 failed 6 removed/2 kept
February 28 promoted 11 failed 5 removed/2 kept
March 21 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/1 kept
April 17 promoted 8 failed 6 removed/1 kept
May 21 promoted 14 failed 2 removed/2 kept
June 21 promoted 10 failed 0 removed/4 kept
July 29 promoted 9 failed 2 removed/1 kept
August 19 promoted 21 failed 0 removed/5 kept
September 22 promoted 8 failed 1 removed/0 kept
October 23 promoted 3 failed 3 removed/0 kept
November 13 promoted 2 failed 2 removed/0 kept
December 13 promoted 9 failed 1 removed/1 kept
2012
January 18 promoted 9 failed 0 removed/1 kept
February 21 promoted 5 failed 0 removed/0 kept
March 17 promoted 8 failed 1 removed/1 kept
April 11 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
May 8 promoted 16 failed 3 removed/1 kept
June 14 promoted 15 failed 2 removed/1 kept
July 18 promoted 7 failed 5 removed/1 kept
August 42 promoted 6 failed 3 removed/2 kept
September 26 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/2 kept
October 28 promoted 15 failed 5 removed/0 kept
November 20 promoted 8 failed 2 removed/3 kept
December 16 promoted 14 failed 4 removed/2 kept
2013
January 19 promoted 12 failed 4 removed/3 kept
February 22 promoted 8 failed 0 removed/1 kept
March 19 promoted 13 failed 0 removed/3 kept
April 19 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/2 kept
May 17 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/1 kept
June 24 promoted 7 failed 0 removed/1 kept
July 23 promoted 9 failed 0 removed/0 kept
August 15 promoted 7 failed 0 removed/0 kept
September 26 promoted 9 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 13 promoted 13 failed 1 removed/1 kept
November 12 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/0 kept
December 8 promoted 3 failed 2 removed/0 kept
2014
January 13 promoted 10 failed 0 removed/0 kept
February 12 promoted 10 failed 3 removed/0 kept
March 28 promoted 8 failed 0 removed/0 kept
April 16 promoted 5 failed 0 removed/1 kept
May 15 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/1 kept
June 11 promoted 6 failed 0 removed/0 kept
July 18 promoted 11 failed 0 removed/1 kept
August 12 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/1 kept
September 16 promoted 13 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 9 promoted 12 failed 1 removed/0 kept
November 14 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/1 kept
December 5 promoted 7 failed 2 removed/2 kept
2015
January 17 promoted 9 failed 2 removed/0 kept
February 13 promoted 5 failed 0 removed/0 kept
March 15 promoted 11 failed 0 removed/1 kept
April 17 promoted 5 failed 11 removed/2 kept
May 15 promoted 9 failed 3 removed/0 kept
June 14 promoted 4 failed 6 removed/0 kept
July 22 promoted 9 failed 1 removed/1 kept
August 29 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
September 26 promoted 4 failed 1 removed/6 kept
October 18 promoted 11 failed 0 removed/1 kept
November 23 promoted 8 failed 4 removed/1 kept
December 10 promoted 4 failed 1 removed/0 kept
2016
January 16 promoted 10 failed 5 removed/0 kept
February 8 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
March 10 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/0 kept
April 12 promoted 6 failed 2 removed/0 kept
May 14 promoted 9 failed 0 removed/0 kept
June 16 promoted 6 failed 2 removed/0 kept
July 9 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/1 kept
August 17 promoted 7 failed 0 removed/0 kept
September 21 promoted 11 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 8 promoted 5 failed 2 removed/2 kept
November 8 promoted 4 failed 1 removed/0 kept
December 10 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
2017
January 14 promoted 9 failed 2 removed/1 kept
February 13 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/0 kept
March 10 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
April 16 promoted 6 failed 3 removed/2 kept
May 16 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
June 12 promoted 5 failed 1 removed/0 kept
July 10 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
August 19 promoted 2 failed 2 removed/2 kept
September 15 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/1 kept
October 15 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
November 19 promoted 3 failed 1 removed/0 kept
December 25 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
2018
January 25 promoted 3 failed 1 removed/0 kept
February 22 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/1 kept
March 15 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
April 16 promoted 6 failed 0 removed/0 kept
May 12 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
June 16 promoted 1 failed 2 removed/1 kept
July 12 promoted 0 failed 1 removed/0 kept
August 14 promoted 3 failed 4 removed/0 kept
September 11 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 14 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
November 13 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/2 kept
December 10 promoted 5 failed 0 removed/0 kept
2019
January 10 promoted 7 failed 1 removed/0 kept
February 10 promoted 0 failed 0 removed/0 kept
March 17 promoted 2 failed 2 removed/0 kept
April 11 promoted 9 failed 2 removed/1 kept
May 15 promoted 5 failed 1 removed/0 kept
June 10 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
July 12 promoted 2 failed 2 removed/3 kept
August 11 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
September 7 promoted 0 failed 1 removed/0 kept
October 8 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
November 13 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
December 10 promoted 3 failed 1 removed/1 kept
2020
January 11 promoted 7 failed 0 removed/2 kept
February 10 promoted 2 failed 3 removed/0 kept
March 8 promoted 0 failed 1 removed/0 kept
April 21 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/1 kept
May 20 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
June 25 promoted 4 failed 1 removed/3 kept
July 15 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
August 26 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
September 17 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 15 promoted 4 failed 2 removed/0 kept
November 15 promoted 5 failed 1 removed/0 kept
December 21 promoted 4 failed 2 removed/1 kept
2021
January 24 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
February 7 promoted 0 failed 2 removed/0 kept
March 21 promoted 8 failed 4 removed/0 kept
April 20 promoted 4 failed 2 removed/2 kept
May 14 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/0 kept
June 17 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/1 kept
July 15 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
August 16 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/1 kept
September 11 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/1 kept
October 23 promoted 1 failed 2 removed/1 kept
November 10 promoted 1 failed 1 removed/0 kept
December 9 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/1 kept
2022
January 21 promoted 1 failed 1 removed/1 kept
February 10 promoted 2 failed 2 removed/2 kept
March 20 promoted 0 failed 3 removed/1 kept
April 17 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
May 20 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
June 2 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
July 13 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
August 22 promoted 5 failed 1 removed/0 kept
September 10 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 10 promoted 4 failed 3 removed/0 kept
November 9 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
December 15 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
2023
January 10 promoted 3 failed 0 removed/0 kept
February 12 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/2 kept
March 19 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/1 kept
April 12 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
May 19 promoted 2 failed 0 removed/0 kept
June 19 promoted 4 failed 1 removed/0 kept
July 16 promoted 5 failed 2 removed/0 kept
August 19 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
September 24 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
October 22 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/0 kept
November 14 promoted 1 failed 0 removed/1 kept
December 15 promoted 0 failed 1 removed/0 kept
2024
January 13 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/0 kept
February 17 promoted 2 failed 1 removed/3 kept
March 26 promoted 5 failed 1 removed/2 kept
April 27 promoted 4 failed 0 removed/0 kept
May 34 promoted 5 failed 3 removed/0 kept
June 29 promoted 6 failed 1 removed/0 kept
July 36 promoted 3 failed 1 removed/2 kept
August 35 promoted 1 failed 1 removed/0 kept
September 23 promoted 5 failed 3 removed/0 kept
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The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 10:01, 31 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): PresN 18:51, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Back again, and again switching from video game lists to increasingly-obscure sci-fi/fantasy award lists. This time around we have a list where the wiki source text is longer than all of the winners combined: the Dwarf Stars award. The super-short-form counterpart to the Rhysling Award (aka the biggest sff poetry award, an admittedly small field), Dwarf Star winners are poems 10 lines or less. Hopefully, this nomination will be short as well! As always, the list format is taken directly from my previous sff award FLs, and reflects comments from those previous FLCs. Thanks for reviewing! --PresN 18:51, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

  • Comments from Crisco 1492
Obscure is right. Any secondary sources with critical commentary? Otherwise this may not be notable.
Anything worth noting about the poems themselves?
"the leaf whisperer" - Deliberate?
"Knowledge Of" - Caps in original?
"Troll Under Bridge" - Caps in original? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:52, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
All capitalization matches that of the poems. I'll look for more secondary sources, right now I just have that Locus tracks the award. --PresN 20:22, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments

  • Shouldn't it be "ten lines or fewer"?
  • In the Publisher or publication column, I can't see any publishers?
  • Is there any third-party source that could be used to clearly demonstrate the notability of this award?

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:17, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Alright, I did TRM's fixes above, but I've been unable to find any good secondary sources. I've found conferences that mention that authors they have speaking there have won it, I've found author's webpages that mention when they win it, but beyond verifiability that the award exists, I'm not finding anything that clearly states anything about the award that's not a primary source. I guess I've been approaching the line on how obscure I could get with these award lists, and I may have crossed it here. I'm going to withdraw this nomination for now- I'm convinced that there are sources out there, but I don't have the time/energy to do a more intensive search for them right now. Sorry all. --PresN 18:50, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

  • Closing note: This candidate has been withdrawn by nominator, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through.
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 21 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): Mickey798 (talk) 15:41, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because Mickey Mouse is a popular character is the list of his cartoons should be used at least to show appreciation to Mickey Mouse since the article has a lot of work to do. Mickey798 (talk) 15:41, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments
  • Was this article submitted for a peer review prior to it being placed as FLC?
  • There are no citations for anything in the introduction.
  • 1928: Steamboat Bill, Jr. and The Gaucho should be in italics. That Disney was making parodies of these films should be sourced.
  • Far too many notes have no citiation.
  • 2010s: Get a Horse (2013) What is this supposed to mean???
  • Releases section: I think it would be better if this was placed at the top; possibly it could be merged with the Production section. Names of DVD releases should be italics. Mickey Mouse in Black and White, Volume Two has the comma in the wrong place. Jimknut (talk) 18:37, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
Oppose
  • The IMDb usually isn't considered a reliable source (see Knowledge (XXG):Citing IMDb).
  • The Disney A–Z ref. needs to be fixed.
  • In notes write The Encyclopedia of Disney Animated Shorts (EDAS) → not just EDAS.
  • Provide page numbers for all Disney A–Z notes.
  • Notes 5, 15, etc. need to be fleshed out. Add full publisher info + date retrieved.
  • The Smith notes → Are "Mickey's Pal Pluto", etc. chapter titles?
  • Tomart's Illustrated Disneyana Catalog and Price Guide → when, where, what is this? If I wanted to look this up how could I do it?
  • There are many things that aren't sourced. For example:
The entire introduction.
The voices actors in the "Production" section.
Most of the directors in the "List of Films" section.
"In 2013, a series of 19 new Mickey Mouse shorts will air on Disney Channel starting June 29."

Underneath-it-All (talk) 02:39, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

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The list was not promoted by Hahc21 10:02, 15 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): Jackyd101 (talk) 23:52, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Believe it or not, its been three years since I last submitted one of these OoB articles, but this follows the pattern of the six others I've done. This lists the orders of battle and casualties of two linked battles fought at sea off Gibraltar in 1801. Although not first rank battles, they are most interesting as the first was a rare defeat for the Royal Navy during this war. Any comments welcome. Regards Jackyd101 (talk) 23:52, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 15:04, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
Note sorry it's taken anyone this long to get back to you. I'll make a full review of this tomorrow. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:47, 12 April 2013 (UTC)

Comments

  • Is it "Algeciras Campaign" or "Algeciras campaign"?
  • Campaign is better, although I've just realised that the B in battle in the article title shouldn't be capitalised. Seems only administrators can move it though . . .--Jackyd101 (talk) 18:24, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
  • "fought between a " .. " against a"... surely just "and" rather than "against" here, i.e. "between A and B" rather than "between A against B"?
  • " to join with the" no need for "with".
  • "calling off the attack at 13:35" you didn't say what time the battle started.
  • You link "gunboat" but not "ship of the line", which is probably more deserving.
  • Please ensure the tables are set up for compliance with MOS:DTT which means adding col scopes as a minimum.
  • Pretty sure just using a flag icon to designate Navy (some of which don't even click through) is not good enough. Suggest you have some words instead.
  • Notes: be consistent with the full stops, usually only for complete sentences.
  • I make it 135 killed in the first table.
  • I make it 239 injured in the first table.
  • These serve me right for relying on sources and not checking the figures myself!
  • First row total in first table is incorrect.
  • Commander of Perla? If unknown I would say as much.
  • I have not been able to find his name in any reliable source, although I imagine time in the Spanish naval archives could turn it up. The Perla situation is very odd - not one source makes any mention of Perla in their descriptions of the battle and yet all include the frigate in their tally of Spanish losses in the battle. I even found a non-RS Spanish language website that stated clearly that Perla was not at the battle at all (although obviously as its non-RS I have to go with what I have available). What should I do if the information exists but is not available in any reliable source I've been able to find?--Jackyd101 (talk) 18:24, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:16, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Thanks very much, replies above. If I haven't replied I've just fixed the problem. Regards--Jackyd101 (talk) 18:24, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
As ever, you're more than welcome. Again, I'm sorry you had to wait so long for comments. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted by Hahc21 10:02, 15 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): Lester Foster (talk | talk) 03:42, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it fits the Featured List criteria. It is based off of two other featured lists on mayors: Mayor of San Francisco and Mayor of Jersey City. Lester Foster (talk | talk) 03:42, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 15:05, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
Brief comments
  • Is there any chance you could translate the salary in the infobox into approximate US$ or similar? I'm afraid most of us won't really know how many Chilean Pesos there are to our own currency!
  • Images are a bit crammed in, particularly due to the images of the city hall and voting offices.
  • No need for "Other offices held" table to be sortable.
  • See WP:YEAR for year ranges, i.e. 1924–1925 should be 1924–25.

The Rambling Man (talk) 14:11, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Everything should be fine now :) --Lester Foster (talk | talk) 18:06, 13 April 2013 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 6 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): Astros4477 (Talk) 19:49, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because... I feel it meets all the criteria and matches other MLB Opening Day starting pitchers lists. Astros4477 (Talk) 19:49, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

Comments

  • In the first sentence, the "team" right after "franchise" should be dropped.
  • The en dash in the first sentence of the third paragraph shouldn't be unspaced according to the MoS. It should be spaced or made into a larger em dash.
  • In ref 2, the publisher shouldn't be italicized since MLB isn't a print publication of any kind, but an organization. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:16, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
Resolved comments from Bloom6132 (talk) 15:51, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
Comments
  • I see "Stadium in italics with ‡ for home game" in the key, but don't see this applied to the table, since the Spiders didn't play a home game. I suggest maybe changing the wording here, since it seems confusing and unnecessary to mention home games when there weren't any.
  • "Sports Reference, LLC" in refs 1 and 4 – remove comma in between.
  • Could I trouble you to help review my current FLC, please?

Bloom6132 (talk) 15:27, 2 April 2013 (UTC)

I addressed both your comments. Yes I could review yours, give me a few days.-- Astros4477 (Talk) 15:36, 2 April 2013 (UTC)

Comments

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:04, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 6 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 19:33, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list. List is comparable to List of Calgary Flames award winners, which is currently a FL. My last Chicago Wolves based list was not promoted due to criteria 3b. With the large amount of information covered and the overall length of the multiple tables I don't think that is concern with this page. Cheers Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 19:33, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 21:06, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
Oppose – Sorry, but I see a number of issues in the writing at the moment.
  • "Wendell Young's number 1 was retired in 2001 five years later Maltais' number 11 was removed from circulation." Feels like it needs a semi-colon after 2001.
  • Team trophies and awards: "the Wolves have won two championships in both leagues. first winning the...". Period should be a comma.
  • "The 2001–2002 championship occurred in the Wolves inaugural AHL season." Wolves needs an apostrophe at the end. A similar edit is needed for the Rob Brown photo caption. Same goes for "the Wolves high scoring top line" in American Hockey League.
  • Second word of the Individual Awards heading should be decapitalized.
  • Comma before "Maltais led the league in the 1999–2000 season" should be a semi-colon instead.
  • I'm not sure if we can say that "As a franchise Chicago's community involvement is evident" based on three awards in nine seasons. Maybe those particular players were just charitable on their own.
  • American Hockey League: Should the second word of "All-rookie team" be capitalized?
That is how it was listed in the source and it was consistent with All-Star. I de-capitalized it
  • "and being named league MPV."?
Changed the wording and linked Most Valuable Player, not sure if that is what this was referring to or not.
  • "Sterling lead the league in goals". "lead" → "led"?
  • In this table the players should be sorting by last name, not first name.
  • Kevin Connauton photo caption: I see "lokking" in the alt text as well as overcapitalization of colors.
  • Dan Snyder Man of the Year Award: In the Position column, the Wings don't need to be capitalized when appearing in their positions.
  • Tim Breslin Unsung Hero Award: Decapitalized "Championship" in the section's second paragraph.
  • In single-page book citations, the pp. should be p.
  • En dashes needed in refs 7, 25, and 28.
  • Reference section heading should be plural. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:39, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing. I believe I have addressed everything above. If I have misconstrued any thing and if there are more errors lurking, please let me know. Cheers --Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:40, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
  • "Then winning the Calder Cup in the 2001–2002 and 2007–2008 seasons.". This is a sentence fragment that would be better if combined with the sentence before it.
Well that was a bonehead mistake, added in the space. --Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 21:16, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
Comments from Harrias
  • "As four time league champions the Wolves have won two titles in both the AHL and the IHL." The use of "As.." at the start of the sentence seems an odd construction: I would suggest cutting it, and rephrasing: "The Wolves are four-time league champions, having won two titles in both the AHL and the IHL."
changed
  • Is there a reason you use YYYY–YYYY rather than the MOS preferred YYYY–YY for seasons? (1999–2000 being an acceptable exception.)
In past FLCs it was asked to standardize the date, so with the inclusion of 1999-2000 I went with all of them being YYYY-YYYY. I can Change it if you think that would be better.
Okay I have changed all dates to the YYYY-YY format, except for those that cross the century lines.
  • Does the "Description" column need to be sortable in the tables? It seems a little odd, as there isn't really any logic to the ordering.
No reason, just lazy I suppose. Removed the sort-ability.
  • A number of sentences need extras commas: "Playing in both the AHL and IHL the Wolves have won two championships.." should be "Playing in both the AHL and IHL, the Wolves have won two championships.." and "While members of the IHL the Wolves.." should be "While members of the IHL, the Wolves.." are two such examples, but there are more scattered through the article.
I got the two listed and I think I found a couple of others, but commas aren't my strong suit so I'm sure I missed some.
  • "Brown's back to back scoring titles were also part of three in four seasons for him personally." This sentence seems awkwardly phrased. I'm not sure how relevant it really is to this list anyway, given that the two titles with the Wolves have already been listed, but if you want to keep it, it should be re-written.
Removed
  • It seems odd using "Top performers at each position over the course of the season." As the description for both First and Second-team All-Stars.
I followed suit with other ice hockey list of awards winner pages, most notably the List of Calgary Flames award winners, which is a FL.
  • "The 2006–2007 season was one of the most successful for the Wolves in terms of individual awards with two players winning four individual trophies and three players garnering end of the year All-Star team honors and two making the All-rookie team." Noun plus -ing, should be rephrased.
Reworded
  • "Although Krog was shutout of the postseason awards, he made up for it the following year" The use of "shutout" seems a little journalistic, rather than encyclopaedic, and particularly given that ice hockey uses the term as a specific statistic, I think it would be best to use a different term. The bit of the sentence after the comma certainly seems more journalistic rather than encyclopaedic.
Removed
  • "In 2007–2008 Krog led the league in goals, assists, and points becoming .." Add a comma after "points".
added
  • Personally I would list the individual awards by league first, ie
    1. International Hockey League
    2. International Hockey League All-Star Game selections
    3. American Hockey League
    4. American Hockey League All-Star Game selections
Moved around to the suggested organization.

I'll leave it there for the time being (as I have to get ready for football (soccer) this evening) but I will continue later. Harrias 16:36, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

I have fixed or commented on the above and will keep an eye out for further comments. Thank you for the review. Cheers --Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 23:54, 15 April 2013 (UTC)


Mild oppose sorry for taking so long to get to this....

  • First lead para is a little clunky for me, four very short factoid sentences.
  • "are four time league " shouldn't that be "four-time"?
  • " Maltais is the most decorated individual in franchise history. He won three individual trophies along with being named a First Team All-Star three times and a Second Team All-Star three times." consider merging to avoid short, clunky sentences.
  • "plus former head" not keen on "plus" in regular prose.
  • Last two sentences of lead, these read odd for an encyclopedia, if "best typifies Breslin's on-ice spirit and team-first attitude" and "demonstrates the most outstanding dedication" are quotes, they should be in quotes, if not then they're not particularly encyclopedic.
  • Why is there a col heading missing for "Ref(s)" in the tables?
  • "Playing in both the AHL and IHL, the Wolves have won two championships in both leagues," -> " The Wolves have won two championships in both the AHL and the IHL..." perhaps?
  • "The 2001–02 championship occurred in the ..." -> "coincided with"?
  • "for excellence in all areas off the ice" same comment about non-encyclopedic tone applies here.
  • "called them a "Forerunner..." shouldn't be capital F.
  • "to 1998 award was given to champion of the Southern Conference/Division." perhaps make this note (and others) standalone, i.e. "Prior to 1998, the Robert W. Clarke Trophy was awarded to...."
  • If "IHL First All-Star Team" doesn't have an article, why is it notable enough to be listed here in this awards list? Same for other awards without articles.
  • You need a key for non-hockey readers. What's LW? What's D? etc.
  • "the two point performance " shouldn't that be "two-point"? And what is a two-point performance? I assume a player gets a point for an assist and a point for a goal but that's not noted anywhere, and I'm not a hockey expert.
  • "reintroduced in the 1994–1995 season." be consistent with year ranges per WP:YEAR.
  • "Kevin Connauton represented the Wolves at the 2012 All-Star Classic" needs a period.
  • "Kari Lehtonenf," e.g. I would put notes after the comma (as you would a ref).
  • Notes e, g, h have periods, f doesn't, why?
  • Notes a thru c are in regular size font, e thru h are smaller. Be consistent.
  • "Brett Sterling was the Dan Snyder Man of the Year Award winner in 2010" needs a period.
  • Why start "bolding" awards in the team award section?
  • "played parts of two seasons with the Wolves, playing in" quick repeat of "play" here, rephrase.
  • "Mark Matheson was the 2012 winner" of what? and needs a period.
  • "an International Hockey League (IHL) expansion team" avoid overlinking, you've already linked IHL (and explained the acronym) and you've already linked expansion team.
  • Ref 5 title number range needs an en-dash.
  • Ref 6 has an error.
  • Times Leader appears to really be called The Times-Leader.
  • I expect there's a "list of awards" category that could be added... (e.g. Category:Lists of award winners)

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:27, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:02, 6 May 2013 (UTC) .


Nominator(s): I Am RufusConversation is a beautiful thing. 17:27, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because having extensively developed the tables and prose, I believe it now meets the FLC standard. (And now this my only open nomination.) I Am RufusConversation is a beautiful thing. 17:27, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

  • Oppose. The leading section does not follow any logical order. It jumps from a single to an album and back. It is difficult to understand. In addition, please, count the number of "also"s in the leading section. It is an obvious example of "also abuse". Ruslik_Zero 18:21, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
Performed a copyedit - removed three of the "also"s, and tried to make the order and flow of the lead more logical. I Am RufusConversation is a beautiful thing. 21:35, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

;Comments Support

  • The first paragraph in the lead should be broken up (perhaps separated by album releases).
  • "contained five singles which all reached the top" → all of which
  • Wiki-link Ludacris in the lead.
  • In the live album and EP section: Formats → format
  • Citations should be added to all claims in the Notes section

Underneath-it-All (talk) 22:15, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 17:45, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
Comments
  • Find a good link for "certified".
  • "12 October 2009 which was preceded by" maybe for neatness just remove "which was" and have a comma after 2009.
  • "house musician" probably should be linked appropriately.
  • Third Strike is a dab link.
  • Avoid blank cells in tables, if there's nothing to say, perhaps add an en-dash.
  • This seems somewhat unnecessary - if there's nothing to say, why add anything? Yes, we put en-dashes in the chart position cells, but that's more a matter of neatness than anything as tables would just be full of tiny empty blank boxes - the certification cells are much bigger, so adding a dash hardly makes any difference. I Am RufusConversation is a beautiful thing. 10:22, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:13, 22 March 2013 (UTC)

  • Ok, not a big deal, but neatness applies throughout, not just the chart positions. The Rambling Man (talk)
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