Knowledge (XXG)'s Peer review process exposes articles to closer scrutiny from a broader group of editors, and is intended for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work, often as a way of preparing a featured article candidate. It is not academic peer review by a group of experts in a particular subject, and articles that undergo this process should not be assumed to have greater authority than any other. For general editing advice, see Knowledge (XXG) style guidelines, Knowledge (XXG) how-to, "How to write a great article", and "The perfect article". Articles that need extensive basic editing should be directed to Pages needing attention, Requests for expansion or Cleanup, and content or neutrality disputes should be listed at Requests for comment. |
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, didn't, didn't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named âReferencesâ or âFootnotesâ, add
<div class="db-cmVmZXJlbmNlcw"><references/></div>
. - Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: aren't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 147 pounds, use 147Â pounds, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 147 pounds. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 6 in..
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: wasn't, didn't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:03, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:03, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 ft , use 5Â ft , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 ft . - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 1.5 ft.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:03, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 225 km, use 225Â km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 225 km. - Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, isn't, don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - The script has spotted the following contractions: wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), meter (A) (British: metre), analyze (A) (British: analyse).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 3DG, use 3Â DG, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 3 DG. - As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), please do not link words in headings.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), please do not link words in headings.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:26, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), harbour (B) (American: harbor), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: wasn't, didn't, DIDN'T, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:26, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: isn't, can't, isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ization (A) (British: isation), modelling (B) (American: modeling), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like âalsoâ, âin additionâ, âadditionallyâ, âmoreoverâ, and âfurthermoreâ may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 19 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like âalsoâ, âin additionâ, âadditionallyâ, âmoreoverâ, and âfurthermoreâ may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), enrollment (A) (British: enrolment), any more (B) (American: anymore), gray (A) (British: grey).
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 36207DG, use 36207Â DG, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 36207 DG. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 36.207 DG.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), categorize (A) (British: categorise), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - The script has spotted the following contractions: wasn't, didn't, don't, couldn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:45, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), realize (A) (British: realise), ization (A) (British: isation), fulfillment (A) (British: fulfilment), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, didn't, don't, won't, Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:48, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), defence (B) (American: defense), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), paralyse (B) (American: paralyze), travelled (B) (American: traveled), any more (B) (American: anymore), curb (A) (British: kerb), program (A) (British: programme), sceptic (B) (American: skeptic).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:48, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10km, use 10Â km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 km. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 180 km.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- it has been
- allege
- it is claimed
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honour (B) (American: honor), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), harbour (B) (American: harbor), favourite (B) (American: favorite), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), realise (B) (American: realize), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), travelled (B) (American: traveled), molt (A) (British: moult), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:48, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:48, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- âIn
the year1683â
- âIn
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:48, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like âalsoâ, âin additionâ, âadditionallyâ, âmoreoverâ, and âfurthermoreâ may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 10 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 05:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.- Episode listing usually doesn't have many links... NOCTURNENOIR 02:14, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)- Impossible, no infobox exists. NOCTURNENOIR 02:14, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.- Again, it's a list... NOCTURNENOIR 02:14, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.- correctly
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, pleasestrikethis comment).- Well, the actual used word is "incorrectly"... NOCTURNENOIR 02:14, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, isn't, can't, doesn't, doesn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:38, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Not possible. NOCTURNENOIR 00:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Not possible. NOCTURNENOIR 00:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- List class. NOCTURNENOIR 00:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), organise (B) (American: organize), realize (A) (British: realise), realise (B) (American: realize), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Changed to American spellings. "programme" is part of "programmed" and therefore doesn't warrant a change. NOCTURNENOIR 00:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
The script has spotted the following contractions: doesn't, doesn't, Don't, can't, can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Fixed. "Don't" is part of a title. NOCTURNENOIR 00:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 3 oz.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
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- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), kerb (B) (American: curb).
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
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- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, can't, can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), categorize (A) (British: categorise), ization (A) (British: isation), estrogen (A) (British: oestrogen), oestrogen (B) (American: estrogen).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- None available--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 15:35, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
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- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Not necessary.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 15:35, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).- Use of this word in an article dealing with serious allegations is necessary.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 16:47, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Won't, doesn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Citation titles.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 15:36, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named âReferencesâ or âFootnotesâ, add
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Won't, Isn't, Can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 35 inches, use 35Â inches, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 35 inches.Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
is considered- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:51, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:51, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 35 kg, use 35Â kg, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 35 kg. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 20 mg.
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), harbor (A) (British: harbour), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), recognize (A) (British: recognise), realize (A) (British: realise), categorize (A) (British: categorise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), anaesthesia (B) (American: anesthesia), signaling (A) (British: signalling), traveled (A) (British: travelled), cosy (B) (American: cozy), program (A) (British: programme).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, Can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:51, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 3 Inches, use 3Â Inches, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 3 Inches. - Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:51, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 3inch, use 3Â inch, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 3 inch. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: won't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- âIn
the year2145â
- âIn
- The script has spotted the following contractions: won't, can't, don't, can't, isn't, won't, don't, couldn't, don't, don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:05, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:05, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:05, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- is considered
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named âReferencesâ or âFootnotesâ, add
<div class="db-cmVmZXJlbmNlcw"><references/></div>
. - Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 48 ng, use 48Â ng, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 48 ng. - Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like âalsoâ, âin additionâ, âadditionallyâ, âmoreoverâ, and âfurthermoreâ may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: hasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant
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. - This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:10, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- is considered
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations(if they already do, or are not weasel terms, pleasestrikethis comment).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honour (B) (American: honor), harbor (A) (British: harbour), meter (A) (British: metre), recognize (A) (British: recognise), realize (A) (British: realise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), counsellor (B) (American: counselor), traveled (A) (British: travelled), any more (B) (American: anymore), skeptic (A) (British: sceptic).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), meter (A) (British: metre), traveled (A) (British: travelled), travelled (B) (American: traveled).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: couldn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â - Avoid misplaced formality: âin order to/forâ (-> to/for), âthereuponâ, ânotwithstandingâ, etc.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, don't, Can't, can't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- Please convert tables from HTML syntax to Help:Table wiki-markup.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), meter (A) (British: metre), defence (B) (American: defense), recognise (B) (American: recognize), realize (A) (British: realise), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), analyse (B) (American: analyze), counsellor (B) (American: counselor).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
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- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Guide to layout.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The script has spotted the following contractions: Wasn't, can't, don't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, didn't, didn't, didn't, didn't, don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.- Added links to article. â Ms. Sarita 21:20, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.- Done. â Ms. Sarita 21:20, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.is consideredmight be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, pleasestrikethis comment).- Removed weasel terms; the one remaining is cited. â Ms. Sarita 21:20, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.- Has been copyedited by a couple other users. â Ms. Sarita 21:20, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
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- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 Mile , use 8Â Mile , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 8 Mile . - As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Done --GrandDrake (talk) 20:23, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
*As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Done --GrandDrake (talk) 16:46, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: favorite (A) (British: favourite), defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), isation (B) (American: ization), traveled (A) (British: travelled), grey (B) (American: gray), program (A) (British: programme).
- The script has spotted the following contractions: isn't, didn't, Can't, Don't, hadn't, hasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), counselor (A) (British: counsellor).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: isn't, don't, don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, wasn't, don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 40 kilometres, use 40Â kilometres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 40 kilometres. - As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}) in headings.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The script has spotted the following contractions: aren't, Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- "aren't" is part of a quote and "Don't" is part of the title belonging to a reference. So, both are okay. â Ms. Sarita 18:08, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Per Knowledge (XXG):What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km, and pounds -> lb.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- many people believe
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: doesn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: harbour (B) (American: harbor), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), meter (A) (British: metre), defence (B) (American: defense), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), recognize (A) (British: recognise), recognise (B) (American: recognize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), curb (A) (British: kerb), program (A) (British: programme).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â - Avoid misplaced formality: âin order to/forâ (-> to/for), âthereuponâ, ânotwithstandingâ, etc.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:24, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:25, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- allege
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strikethis comment).
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:24, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
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- The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: won't, wasn't, weren't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 02:24, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
Per Knowledge (XXG):Context and Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.- Done.--CarlosPatiño (talk) 04:13, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article.(Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)- No applicable infobox.--CarlosPatiño (talk) 04:13, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 59 grams, use 59Â grams, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 59 grams.- All measurements of 'tonnes' and 'grams' made to comply.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- I believe the only dates using 'th' are direct quotations (translated), which should remain there to reflect the original words of the author.
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.- Fixed.
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.- Fixed.
Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.- The ones that are capitalized are proper nouns.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- I would advise against it, seeing as the article, while large, relates to one very specific subject.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), metre (B) (American: meter), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), counsellor (B) (American: counselor), jewellery (B) (American: jewelry).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:28, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
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- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The script has spotted the following contractions: couldn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.--  ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 18:14, 4 December 2008 (UTC)- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:28, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:28, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 40 lbs.
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 04:28, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:20, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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- This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant
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. - Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:20, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:20, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (links) and Knowledge (XXG):Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: Doesn't, Aren't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE ]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see Knowledge (XXG):Persondata for more information. - As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long â consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Knowledge (XXG):Summary style.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â - Avoid misplaced formality: âin order to/forâ (-> to/for), âthereuponâ, ânotwithstandingâ, etc.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:20, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Avoid including galleries in articles, as per Knowledge (XXG):Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to wikicommons or integrating images with the text.
- Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 km, use 5Â km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 km. - Per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth. Specifically, an example is 1.5 km.
- As per Knowledge (XXG):Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30 was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.â
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - âsomeâ, âa variety/number/majority ofâ, âseveralâ, âa fewâ, âmanyâ, âanyâ, and âallâ. For example, â
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon . is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 03:20, 3 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The script has spotted the following contractions: don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 06:00, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Knowledge (XXG):Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Knowledge (XXG):Image use policy and fit under one of the Knowledge (XXG):Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Knowledge (XXG), go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 06:00, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Knowledge (XXG)'s best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APRÂ t 06:00, 1 December 2008 (UTC)